rising streets
extending cables
warping like piano keys
outstretched hands
reaching for smiles in the stars
softly cutting the silent music
music swimming through the air
and I'm running in circles
I'm running in circles
and I don't want to wake up
never ending roads
crawling everywhere
countless lights in the distance
glistening like jewels in the
in the water soaked moon light
fishes in their bowls
people tripping on stones in the road
and I'm running in circles
I'm running in circles
and I don't want to wake up
why didn't I know then
what I know now?
that all of this was possible
just because I looked into your eyes?
I have found forever
and here is where I wish to stay...
I'm running in circles
and I don't want to wake up
said I'm running in circles
and I don't want to wake up
I cannot help but smile
everytime you enter my
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I'm running in circles
and I don't give a fuck"
Only bit I have any problem with. If you saw my work you'd know I have no problem with excessive profanity, but it doesn't seem to fit ito the rest of the piece.
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Danny P
I can see why that part doesn't seem like it belongs
The main aspect of this was that when you're dreaming, you can control just about everything that goes on, so I was trying to give this piece that concept of "nothing makes sense, because everything around me isn't what it seems, therefore I don't have to worry about what the world thinks of me anymore", hence the I don't give a fuck part. I'll see what I can use to replace that part with though.
Thanks again for your help, your work is pretty neat
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.■ kris flores ■.
my website -> click
said I'm running in circles
and I don't want to wake up
i would kill to live in this poem.
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10, 9, 8 and I'm breaking away. I'm all dressed up and ready to play.
You need my plasma more than I do
crawling everywhere
countless lights in the distance
glistening like jewels in the
in the water soaked moon light
splendid
xo!
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I am a poetry admin for =DailyLitDeviations.
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with skin you'll win
and here is where I wish to stay...
I'm running in circles
and I don't want to wake up
I hear a heavy song-influence throughout.
Lovely.
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